assess the different strategies in the Uk

University dissertation. Topic I have chosen: assess the different strategies in the Uk property investment market and how it has changed over the last couple of decades.
This question requires someone with good knowledge surrounding the investment property market, ie HMOs, buy to let, joint ventures etc. I have a template which can be used to follow and a marking criteria:
80+
As below plus:
Outstanding work – contains accurate, relevant material, demonstrates understanding of complex subject matter & is able to view it in a wider context. Shows originality & confidence in analysing and criticising assumptions, is aware of the limits of knowledge. Likely to add new insights to the topic & approaches the quality of published material
Evidence of extensive research, uses & presents references effectively
Outstanding quality in terms of organisation, structure, use & flow of language, grammar, spelling, format, presentation, diagrams, tables etc
70-79
As below plus:
Outstanding work – contains accurate, relevant material, demonstrates understanding of complex subject matter & is able to view it in a wider context. Shows originality & confidence in analysing and criticising assumptions, is aware of the limits of knowledge
Evidence of extensive research, uses & presents references effectively
Excellent in terms of organisation, structure, use & flow of language, grammar, spelling, format, presentation, diagrams, tables etc
60-69
As below plus:
Very good work – contains most of the information required, is accurate & relevant & demonstrates understanding of the subject matter & attempts to view it in a wider context. Shows some originality of thought with good critique & analysis assumptions, is aware of the limits of knowledge
Well researched, good use & presentation of references
Very good in terms of organisation, structure, use & flow of language, grammar, spelling, format, presentation, diagrams, tables etc