Thesis Revision/ persuasive essay
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Thesis statement:
Families should have the privilege to choose because without health insurance they won’t go to hospital and unemployment affects their health status.
Revise your first body paragraph to include in-text citations and analysis of your evidence where needed. Paragraphs should be 5–7 sentences.
1.Draft your first paragraph to develop supporting point 1, which was:
without health insurance, why family without health insurance will not be allow to choose any doctor of their kind
. Body paragraphs should be 5–7 sentences and include a topic sentence, evidence, and analysis. Cite sources using APA style
2.Draft your second paragraph to develop supporting point 1. Cite sources
3. Draft your first paragraph to develop supporting point 2, which was:
they won’t go to hospital. people won’t go hospital with the fear of being uninsured
. Body paragraphs should include a topic sentence, evidence, and analysis. Cite sources
4.Draft your second paragraph to develop supporting point 2.
5. Draft your first paragraph to develop supporting point 3, which was:
unemployment affects their health status
. Body paragraphs should include a topic sentence, evidence, and analysis. Cite sources
6.Draft your second paragraph to develop supporting point 3
7. Draft a paragraph of 5–7 sentences that addresses at least one counter perspective to your position. Cite sources. The counter perspective from your outline is:
Reduced cost on health insurance.
write your conclusion paragraph. Remember to restate your thesis and leave readers with a lasting impression. Your paragraph should be 5–7 sentences.
List four sources
instruction
Include a cover page with the assignment name, your name, the course name,
Number your pages.
Use double-spacing.
Indent the beginning of each paragraph.
Use 12-point Times New Roman font.
Use one-inch margins
It should be exactly the way it is with the numbers
4 pages APA style for citing sources
"96% of our customers have reported a 90% and above score. You might want to place an order with us."
